Mango Face

I quite like the cynicism of the whole story. The concept of figuring out information piece by piece / step by step was really intriguing.

At the same time, though, there were a few options I did not understand: first of all, what does building up courage do? Also, "You figure out something." implies that you have uncovered information; however, many times, no extra information shows back at the restroom.

This is SO good!! Finding more clues each time you go back to the restroom is such a smart technique. And the tone of the opening screen is great -- humorous but builds seriousness too. I didn't know if the "building courage" button did anything, but I kept clicking it because it felt calming somehow...and then I felt attacked by the "enough" lol! Great use of Twine's technical capabilities, great story, totally intriguing and I want to figure out what happens!!

I really enjoyed the concept of trying to solve the mystery of your friend's murder, 'trusting' your friends and building courage. Although, I do not understand what does "KH", "CK", and "JB" mean. I am quite confused and couldn't figure out the other endings. 

Hi Wentao, I thought the concept of this game seemed very intriguing. I will say that the ambiguity is rather hard to understand at first, but as I kept restarting, I understood the value of trusting each choice, which I think is cool. I am just wondering if there was something I was missing to not find the full ending? I played through at least 5 times and felt like I wasn't getting much farther than before. I did enjoy the information presented though, and how the concept of trying to understand what happened to your dead friend brings into larger questions that makes me curious about the ending and question the information that already presented. It really does feel like every choice you make matters, which I enjoy,  I just wish there were some feedback loops so I can understand why my choice was impactful. I think reading it all out at the end somewhat makes sense and the humor is nice. Overall, I enjoy your storytelling and you did a great job!

I think the concept of trying to solve the mystery of your friend's death by cycling through testimony and choosing which statements to trust is very interesting and a fun concept! It's almost in the realm of Ace Attorney or Danganronpa, however it took me a little while to figure out that that's what I was doing! At first I didn't understand what the acronyms "KH", "CK", and "JB" were and I felt very lost. After my first couple playthroughs, that's when I understood more of what I was doing, but no matter what I choose, I've only been getting the "poor donald," and the "i couldn't figure out the rest" endings and I'm not sure what else I should be doing to get other endings!